can someone help me with this poem i wrote?

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homely dude

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When a smile is just a smile
And a hug is just a hug
All you need is time
when I look into your eyes
It makes butterflies smile
and fly to your heart
When the I see butterflies
Come and go it makes my butterflies
Fly and makes me warm inside

hows my poem and TELL ME THE TRUTH
 
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