J Jessica New member Oct 21, 2010 #1 please make a few suggestions on how i can make it better or add on ; as it gets colder and colder, i begin to shiver i can barley take the cold, my body begins to quiver my blood is flowing swiftly; like a flowing river
please make a few suggestions on how i can make it better or add on ; as it gets colder and colder, i begin to shiver i can barley take the cold, my body begins to quiver my blood is flowing swiftly; like a flowing river
