Can someone help me with me poem?

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AJM

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i am writing a poem about missing home and i am stuck, can any1 help me. Can you edit the line its there not ok and add stuff in plz: my poem is below

Sometimes i wonder
if am i ever going back,
sometimes i wonder
if you know how much i miss every1
i wanna go back
but not to live
i still cry nearly every day
its nearly been a year
but not to me
i sit there thinkin about home

^^^ can some1 finish the poem plz
 
dont let someone else finish it .. finish it yourself.
dig deep inside of your heart and soul and let it just come to you. what about home makes your feel this way, what does home represent to you....you can do it! You've done this so far, you can finish it! You may not know me, but I believe in you..think about what you miss most ...
good luck

p.s. poetry isnt meant to be grammically correct.. edit it with what you believe it should say and what you think sounds good
 
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