Catherine smiled, “You think your tough, say everything you texted me to my face!”
“Catherine I am sorry for that, I was sad I didn’t think.”
Catherine leaned in close to Rebecca‘s face, “It’s too late to say sorry. You don’t scare me!”
“Please I don’t want trouble,” Rebecca begged.
Catherine pushed Rebecca back, “trouble, its’ too late!” Catherin yelled.
Rebecca fell and hit her head on a chair, “I‘m sorry!” Jean thought she’d jump up or try to runaway but she did the opposite. Jean felt her hard shell break as she watched weak and helpless Rebecca cry. She sobbed and covered her face with her shaky fingers. Jean put her lips to Catherine’s ear, "Rebecca had enough let's go." she whispered.
Catherine’s blurred vision cleared, she realized she took things too far but didn't want to admit it to Jean. She saw the security guards coming and ran, “she is not worth my time!" Jean walked away with Catherine, "look at her she's shaking," Jean whispered.
rewrite it and you win but seriously any tips?
“Catherine I am sorry for that, I was sad I didn’t think.”
Catherine leaned in close to Rebecca‘s face, “It’s too late to say sorry. You don’t scare me!”
“Please I don’t want trouble,” Rebecca begged.
Catherine pushed Rebecca back, “trouble, its’ too late!” Catherin yelled.
Rebecca fell and hit her head on a chair, “I‘m sorry!” Jean thought she’d jump up or try to runaway but she did the opposite. Jean felt her hard shell break as she watched weak and helpless Rebecca cry. She sobbed and covered her face with her shaky fingers. Jean put her lips to Catherine’s ear, "Rebecca had enough let's go." she whispered.
Catherine’s blurred vision cleared, she realized she took things too far but didn't want to admit it to Jean. She saw the security guards coming and ran, “she is not worth my time!" Jean walked away with Catherine, "look at her she's shaking," Jean whispered.
rewrite it and you win but seriously any tips?