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Palm Trees
by Juwana Abuzainah
Palm trees waving
In the early morning breeze
Outlined by
The sea colored sky
Its fruit is like
A big nut that
Tastes sweet
And gives you energy
It shades from the sun
And fans in the wind
It shows you how
To stay strong in tough times
It lives in the harsh deserts
And drinks too little
It grows so long
And lives as much as a turtle
Whether as food or as tree
So much you can do with this creature
wherever it lives
it’s the dominant feature.
Palm Trees
by Juwana Abuzainah
Palm trees waving
In the early morning breeze
Outlined by
The sea colored sky
Its fruit is like
A big nut that
Tastes sweet
And gives you energy
It shades from the sun
And fans in the wind
It shows you how
To stay strong in tough times
It lives in the harsh deserts
And drinks too little
It grows so long
And lives as much as a turtle
Whether as food or as tree
So much you can do with this creature
wherever it lives
it’s the dominant feature.