Can anyone edit or check this sestina of religion?

Keen

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5 words:
Powerful
Universal
Belief
God
Culture
Tradition

1.Religions are the most powerful.
2.They are considering universal.
3.We all have different kinds of religious belief.
4.We all worship the same or different God.
5.We all have our own culture.
6.And in culture, many families follow a family tradition.

6.Some family has a Christmas tradition.
1.Which is one of the traditions that are powerful.
5.They belong to a Christian culture.
2.Which is one of the cultural universal.
4.Jesus is their holy god.
3.Every Christian all have this belief.

3.In the Buddhism belief.
6.Reincarnation is one of their traditions.
4. Siddhartha Gautama is their god.
1. His teaching is very powerful.
2. They are accepted in worldwide universal.
5. Cycle of suffering and rebirth reflect Buddhism culture.


5.One of the important cultures is Jewish culture.
3.G-d is one of their beliefs.
2.Jewish experience universal.
6.The Torah the basis of Jewish law and tradition.
1. Jewish tradition is powerful.
4. Their god is known as Monotheists.

4.Daoism is one of the traditions that doesn’t have main god.
5. Laozi depicted as the teacher of the culture.
1.Wu wei is also the main construction of powerful.
3. Their tradition reflect the harmony with the Universe.
6. Daoism is also one of the Chinese Culture.
2. There are some attractions in Daoist universal.

2.Each Religion exists in anywhere in this universe.
4.Each of the religion has their own god.
6.Each of the people has their own tradition.
5.Each of the country has their own culture.
3.Each has own sets of belief.
1.In this world religion is the most powerful.
*6 words not 5
 
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