Boulders

[Con Asskicker]

The boulders in my shoes
Tumble smooth
Stabbing at the fleshy pad
The rhythm of scraping
Rounding edges soft
To pebbles small
Wobbling further

 

[Bubba G.]

The first two lines flow well, would definately recommend you write a new song off of them. The rest of your lyrics are just unnecessary movement that goes nowhere. I understand you think you're very clever using all that rock imagery but cut it out. Seriously.