Beginner, Japanese essay, need help fixing spelling and grammar?

jasy

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this is mm mini essay for jap class, wondering if someone can help me find grammar and spelling errors, i only started learning jap a month and a half ago , so if there are a lot of mistakes, i'm sorry. and thank you in advance
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