Are you good at poetry?????????????????? help me out everyone?

keke

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i need two things please tell me what this poem mean to you in detail and rate it 1-10 please also what will make it better please help me out what should the title be should it change. please take note to everything I ask


DEAR LOVE OF MY LIFE
DEAR X LOVE OF MY LIFE
I JUST WANTED TO TAKE THE TIME TO SEND MY CONDOLENCES
WHAT HAPPEN U ASK?
HE DIED
YES THIS MORNING AROUND 5 HE DIED, HE DIED IN MY MIND
AND TOOK BREATH FROM THE DUST OF MY LEAD
AND NOW LIVES IN THE NOTEBOOK I REACHED FOR THAT SITS ON MY NIGHT STAND
WHICH WAS FUNNY BECAUSE IT WAS EXACTLY WHERE IT WAS SUPPOSE TO BE
AND NOW I UNDERSTAND I HAD TO GO THRU WHAT I DID WITH YOU TO BECOME THE PERSON IM SUPPOSE TO B
EVERYONE KEEPS FORGETTING WHAT DOES IT MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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