are these poems ok im 12... how are they?

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you think i lison know
i dont care the time you
started i just dazed a long stare

yout lips seem to have moved
but i have heard no sound

your voice has no meaning
it just demeaning there is know rythem
just the twisting and turning
of your for saken words all mxed
up and turned around.

come up close
come up clear now now
my dear i hear what you have said
and you did the right ryme
so follow that pattern to make you my latern
the shineing star.


lavender flower my story i wrote

the place the time
it will blow your mind
the world may change when
you reach the flower

your heart stop
no skips a beat you
feel the wind benith
 
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