Zoya Farooque
New member
i'm just a teenage girl... it's one of the songs i like
and my hobby is to write songs but i'm not sure they are good or not.
pleaseeeeeeeee help me make em better...
and please help me in any way possible to make it better!
ciao!!
here i stand, in darkness.
waitin' for someone i knew,
someone to be true.
who's gonna light my fire?
who's gonna fill me with desire?
take me away, take me somewhere safe
where there's nothin' left to be afraid.
where i can be on my own, cuz its time to move on...
you were so BITTER,
i should've known it for better.
you're not my angel, as you push me through hell!!
i thought you'd show me the right path,
but you just betrayed...........
and it goes on like this...
help me make em better..
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.
and my hobby is to write songs but i'm not sure they are good or not.
pleaseeeeeeeee help me make em better...
and please help me in any way possible to make it better!
ciao!!
here i stand, in darkness.
waitin' for someone i knew,
someone to be true.
who's gonna light my fire?
who's gonna fill me with desire?
take me away, take me somewhere safe
where there's nothin' left to be afraid.
where i can be on my own, cuz its time to move on...
you were so BITTER,
i should've known it for better.
you're not my angel, as you push me through hell!!
i thought you'd show me the right path,
but you just betrayed...........
and it goes on like this...
help me make em better..
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.