Are these good lyrics for a song?

Gt H

New member
I know it was strange from the start
But I could tell deep inside our hearts
That nothing would ever draw us apart

Until you set your mind on someone else
After you said our love was unbreakable

I trusted you , I though you trusted me
But I don't care cause in the end you'll be the one sayin' sorry

After you find out how successful I've become
You'll think back and tell yourself "I should've stayed with him"

Being with you just made me sick
I'm glad me and you are over with

I was stuck on you for to long
I didn't realize how far I've gone
My friends, I deserted them
Thank the Lord I got them back again
I almost lost what I live for
All because you're a dirty wh*re

I always thought you were the love of my life
Looking back at it, I thank God I thought twice
Now were done, this is the end
Once again, I'm glad we're over with.



Be honest with your opinions... Haha this didn't that long... I just wanted to test my ability to write lyrics... A scale from 1-10 would be fine... Thanks!!!
 
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