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I have four Haikus I have written i would just like to know your opinion on them.Oh and can you please choose your favourite haiku out of number 1 and 2 and say the good and bad things about all the Haikus.Thank you,BTw I'm only 7th grade...
1.The knife cuts slowly
Pain numbs your emotion
you cry blissully
2.You doge,he's coming
pain overcomes you,you scream
but no one listens
3.In the bathroom line
You jump up and down,busting
Regretting that drink
4.With no neck showing
SHe travels through magic dreams.
Enchanted by books.
1.The knife cuts slowly
Pain numbs your emotion
you cry blissully
2.You doge,he's coming
pain overcomes you,you scream
but no one listens
3.In the bathroom line
You jump up and down,busting
Regretting that drink
4.With no neck showing
SHe travels through magic dreams.
Enchanted by books.