Tell me what you think of this one. Its called "Ocean".
Some days
you are an azure hue
and I see
the tranquil side of you:
your words are dunes
your laugh the breeze
that promises forever
on peaceful seas.
And then the tide turns -
your sky is grey
I cannot keep
the storm at bay
your gale-force words,
your laugh that mocks
drives hope, like ships,
upon the rocks.
I yearn for you, and yet I fear
you'll drown the dreams that I hold dear.
I thirst for you, but you are brine -
you cannot quench this heart of mine.
I'd love to hear your opinions of this, as well as any meanings you would attach to it.
Some days
you are an azure hue
and I see
the tranquil side of you:
your words are dunes
your laugh the breeze
that promises forever
on peaceful seas.
And then the tide turns -
your sky is grey
I cannot keep
the storm at bay
your gale-force words,
your laugh that mocks
drives hope, like ships,
upon the rocks.
I yearn for you, and yet I fear
you'll drown the dreams that I hold dear.
I thirst for you, but you are brine -
you cannot quench this heart of mine.
I'd love to hear your opinions of this, as well as any meanings you would attach to it.