anybody feeling like editing a poem?

[trying to get buff]

Shining bright eyes,
as hot as blue fires,
one look and you have me,
your beauty inspires.

And all I can say,
for that gorgeous blonde hair,
is all other girls must be crying,
for they feel it's not fair.

Beauty you have,
this is already known,
but your personality glows,
and this to me is what has shown.