Any thoughts on this blurb, is there something you would change, or something that

doesnt sound right? I would like opinions, if there was a sentence you would chance what would it be?
(If you been a complete jerk off, im going to come find you and stab you ;) I wouldnt try if I was you!)

Scarlett Matthews is a fifteen-year-old orphan whose main stability through childhood was her best friend Autumn Winslow, until Scarletts mother died. When Scarlett is forced to overcome her mothers death it catapultes her into a world in which she feels she doesn't belong. With memories of the past and the rekindling of an old friendship, Scarlett struggles to find her own world. Rejecting her impulses becomes impossible as Scarlett finds herself struggling with love, loss and secret passions.
Oops* I meant if you BE A COMPLETE JERK OFF haha. ;)
NOTMYREALNAME-

Well, SHE IS an orphan NOW, if I said she WAS and orphan that wouldnt make sense. No her bestfriend was her stability through childhood, until her mother died and she became an orphan AND SCARLETT HAD TO BE PUT INTO A NEW FAMILY BUT IN A DIFFERENT STATE, but I dont want to give that all away, like all the different things.. :)
OHH, and im pretty sure I made her impulses pretty clear-
Rejecting her impulses becomes impossible as Scarlett finds herself struggling with (((((((love, loss and secret passions.)))))))) IN THOSE BRACKETS!
 
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