any opinions on my poem please?

Kirstie M

New member
I dont know what to think, I'm having trouble writing lately. what do you think? thank you

Hold my hand,
I want to hear your voice.
I want to know that you are coming,
I want you to know that this is my choice.


And I would walk across that town,
To find you and our secrets that I can keep.
Because my heart is no longer my own,
I think I’m in too deep.


I drowned it out, I blocked out all sound.
Still I long to hear your heart,
Still I long to hear those words,
The words I have thought since the start.

I fear that you are leaving,
Before you have arrived.
I fear that for you this is fleeting,
But I believe that this will survive.


Gold gets old,
But it will never rust.
And yes we can grow,
But it is you that I trust.

Still I feel a state of confusion,
Yes I admit that I am wandering,
Around my mind like an echo.
Wondering if this will ever be.
 
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