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Saving Us

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Have you ever known the feeling of losing your other half?
The world, nothing more without the person,nothing less
Finding that one thing that made you joyful,
In the moments you needed it best?
His aches were stolen and thrown in a second, away,
Ropes of hope were ripping slowly off my cardiac cage,
That tangled feeling flew out of me and followed him,
And with no heart beat and self respect, I stay to live,
Never knew such a dangerous view,
Towards all the livings surrounding me,
I couldn't help but given,
Into what doctors though could be.
Mother comes in,
Tries to comfort gently,
Here are your healing pills,
Swallow them carefully.
 
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