kal el NANDO
New member
Hi! Can anybody tell me if there is a mistake if the following little writing made for me...tomorrow i have to present it. so i am looking for any mistake. thanks.
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However, after two days I received a call from STUDIO 92. They told me that I had won the contest and I could have a talk with TRAVIS and could go to the concert with VIP tickets. In the talk, I could take photos of the whole group and get autographs. Then I talked briefly with Francis Healy (the lead singer of the Scottish band), he told me about their futures plans. That one meeting made it a day I will never forget.
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However, after two days I received a call from STUDIO 92. They told me that I had won the contest and I could have a talk with TRAVIS and could go to the concert with VIP tickets. In the talk, I could take photos of the whole group and get autographs. Then I talked briefly with Francis Healy (the lead singer of the Scottish band), he told me about their futures plans. That one meeting made it a day I will never forget.