Another short piece of free verse, would you advise if you can improve it , thanks?

cassie58

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A Measure of Comfort

In her grief,
weary from the wash of life's waves,
she struggled to stay afloat.
On a hook,
forlorn, his navy bathrobe
hanging where he'd left it.

She took it,
wrapped herself inside,
collar up, and inhaled
his essence.
 
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