another poetry question that no one wants to answer!... but please?

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Be mean. "cute" or "lame" isn't really constructive. I just need a couple sentences with your thoughts.. thanks!


AUTUMN

Catch me.
Please?
I’d rather turn limp in your hands
Than be crushed,
brown and brittle on the ground
Under your shoe.

Autumn is cruel,
But who are you to criticize
The beautiful season
If you won’t even catch
A dying leaf

Like me.
 
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