another poem!!!!! rate it?? tell me what ya think??

  • Thread starter Thread starter R.I.P Heath Miss you =(
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R.I.P Heath Miss you =(

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not too creative but oh well

i might have shattered your heart
but i'll fix what i have ruined
give me one more chance
i know what i'm doing

my love is the healer
not the disease itself
i'll give you everything
including myself

i'm in love with you
i know i'm not perfect
i might have been cruel
but i have no more secrets

you dug up the truth
now you know it all
i am just a human
now don't let me fall

forgive me or not
you'll always be in my heart
but wait until i show you
how i love you alot

i'll be true this time
i'll tell you everything
but all i want from you
is to be understanding

our love was strong
and has gotten weak
but it's not too late
to head for a new peak
 
OMG I really like and enjoy the fist part of it, honestly I like it, it has everything, a good message, good rhimes, it is so sweet and col also, if u dedicate this 2some1 it is really nice

fight and never give up.

so cooooool

I am mexican though
 
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