Am I on my way to being at least a lil better than kreayshawn?

[Cheesy *Call Me Bowser*]

i dish out the unthinkable its somethin severe
tell me what ya really think, that i wont persevere?
dont apologize let me just make something clear
me, five star chef, you a soup kitchen volunteer
producin hot flows like they fresh out the oven
servin all them disbelievers like they be steady starvin
lyrics so conditional like good food they say its so nutrtional
im top of the food chain, yo futures so equivocal
say you.re the best? nah id say its the reciprocal
spreadin my knowledge so im feedin the masses
give em something good, too hot fog up ya glasses
my rhyme penetrate deep like good lovin, call it a stallion
bread so hefty only one could imagine
rollin in the dough, didn't know I could be this outstanding
dig into this pie, poetic overflow, smells so enchanting
shifts over, hang up the apron, wrap it up to go? cuz my flow is what you.re lackin

if you wana hear it . .http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YkvptfujtUs
lol dont laugh at me & i dont have a mic so dont hate on the sh*tty quality.
lol thanks & @fear hahah you be quiet!