The Mountain of Death
Hey, today is my bachelor party. “I am going to get together with my friends; Sal and Vinny. We are going to Patan, Nepal to go explore the natural, beautiful land. We set off on our plane in 2 hours, I have to leave right now bye honey!” I said. “Bye Jerry” said Alice.
ring...ring... “Hi Sal is Vinny with you because I am on my way to pick you guys up if he’s there.” I said rapidly. “Yeah Vinny is here we are on the computer looking at Patan to see the weather and look for hiking routes.” said Sal. “Okay” said I.
HONK HONK “Sal and Vinny hurry up we have an hour to get to the airport.” said Jerry.
“How much do I owe you for this plane ticket” Said Vinny. “Well Vinny you owe me about hmmm.... $800.00 or so.” I muttered.
“Ok we are here” said I. We all went to our plane and put our luggage away. *Time for take off!* said the Pilot.
Thats it I just want to know if this is correctly punctuated and If I quoted correctly
Hey, today is my bachelor party. “I am going to get together with my friends; Sal and Vinny. We are going to Patan, Nepal to go explore the natural, beautiful land. We set off on our plane in 2 hours, I have to leave right now bye honey!” I said. “Bye Jerry” said Alice.
ring...ring... “Hi Sal is Vinny with you because I am on my way to pick you guys up if he’s there.” I said rapidly. “Yeah Vinny is here we are on the computer looking at Patan to see the weather and look for hiking routes.” said Sal. “Okay” said I.
HONK HONK “Sal and Vinny hurry up we have an hour to get to the airport.” said Jerry.
“How much do I owe you for this plane ticket” Said Vinny. “Well Vinny you owe me about hmmm.... $800.00 or so.” I muttered.
“Ok we are here” said I. We all went to our plane and put our luggage away. *Time for take off!* said the Pilot.
Thats it I just want to know if this is correctly punctuated and If I quoted correctly