Alone in thought

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Rdy4Summer

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We are here to celebrate the death of myself.
I will miss myself, I hope you miss me too.
Why were you there for me?
I was never there for you.
You dont know my history,
I never told you.
Yet you still shout it when my eyes close.
You still held me close to you,
Even when my expression froze.
Maybe I did set a date?
You never stopped to talk that late.
I still fell like I turned you away.
We are better without the wait.
Maybe we will never meet one day.
Maybe you will miss me as I slip away.
While you wait,
I will celebrate,
The death of myself.
 
"Maybe we will never meet one day." this line kinda threw me off. I need an explanation.

I hate it when people do this to me, but I'm gonna do it anyway. I think instead of "where is my nurse button," "where is my morphine button." I dunno, i say this probably because if I was on my deathbed I'd want some fucking morphine haha. I hate it when people tell me to change things like that though because it probably changes your intended meaning.
 
I realise the last line is supposed to reveal who you're talking about, but it feels so jarring and out of place. I liked how this started though, although it eventually becomes a bit of a barrage of one-liner cliches.
 
LOL KIT HAHHAHAHHAHA. My GF and I ate some B&J last night. I prefer cookie dough or American dream...Colbert is funy stuRAB.

Thanks Kit, you always make my day a little brighter with your funny posts.
 
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