this is to my bf but i such at english, grammar and poems 
any advice to make better or should i just trash it?
WHAT DO U FEEL WHILE READING!
(read every first word of every line
what do u see hehe 
Thinking of You
Love is magical because it appears suddenly,
Only you can make my heart beat fast
Vivid images appear, the moment I close my eyes and,
Everyday I reminisce the memories we had together
Yearning for the day till you come back so,
Our hearts can reunite again, but
Until that day, we will work hard in our studies
Time seems to pass by slowly and,
I’m constantly thinking of you,
Like every second, every hour, and everyday
Loneliness is unbearable when you are not by my side
Every night before sleeping we never forget,
To say our goodnights and sweet dreams
Every night I daydream endlessly about,
Romantic, happy fantasies
Nothing in this world could separate us
It is difficult for a long distance relationship but,
Together we will fight and get through this so,
You and I will reunite again, I love you till eternity
any advice to make better or should i just trash it?
WHAT DO U FEEL WHILE READING!
(read every first word of every line
what do u see hehe Thinking of You
Love is magical because it appears suddenly,
Only you can make my heart beat fast
Vivid images appear, the moment I close my eyes and,
Everyday I reminisce the memories we had together
Yearning for the day till you come back so,
Our hearts can reunite again, but
Until that day, we will work hard in our studies
Time seems to pass by slowly and,
I’m constantly thinking of you,
Like every second, every hour, and everyday
Loneliness is unbearable when you are not by my side
Every night before sleeping we never forget,
To say our goodnights and sweet dreams
Every night I daydream endlessly about,
Romantic, happy fantasies
Nothing in this world could separate us
It is difficult for a long distance relationship but,
Together we will fight and get through this so,
You and I will reunite again, I love you till eternity