A Series of poems, by me! Please Rate Them! ?

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Please share some poetry! I love hearing others work, as well as getting comments from my own!

Please, share some poetry that you really enjoy!

Here's some that I just made up, im only 13 so keep that in mind, I know it's not the best but bear with me! :D

Midnight:

Midnight, you tremble through the leaves,
Midnight, you here the crack of soil,
Midnight the silence of the forest,
Midnight, you begin to sweat,
Midnight, you hear the motionless panting,
Midnight, then feel it
Midnight, you hear a growl,
Midnight, then you see it!
Midnight, the callers vow.

Rain:

The drops of rain so settle and melancholy on my body.
The smell of the watery residue left onto the frozen cement.
As I walk through the meadow, I hear the sounds of god's wrath from the clouds, and I sit in utter silence, waiting for the rain to subdue, and the peacefullness to come again, another day or serenity.

Well, I just made the second one up, but please, share some of your own!

Thank you!!!!
Tyler
 
What am I?

I am the ever so soft feathers in your pillow,
I am the pearly white tiger of Siberia,
continuously running through the soft snow,
Blending in ever so calmly.
I am the color red,
Bright and radiant,
I am the color green,
full of life and peacefulness.
I am a silent snow storm,
fierce and elegant.
I am the smell of a tundra,
sharp and fresh.
I am the taste of limes,
sour, but ever so tempting.
I am the sound of a tiger roaring,
bold and frightening.
I am the son of Earth,
full of life.
I am the dream of success,
The dream of becoming prosperous.
Who am I?

I wrote this for Language Arts :/

It is not a poem about god. It's supposed to be about me, but I dont really think this describes me alot I just wrote what I could :/
wrote this poem today, tell me what you think, just chose me as best answer and you can comment to me or even better email me at [email protected] im 13 as well, so it would be nice to hear from someone my age and someone else who enjoys poetry. :)
 
i really like the second one you are so good for a 13 year old , im not that good but i think i might try to write some thank you for your inspiration
 
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