a practice poem.. not sure if this has the right meter, but I tried. What do you think?

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Baby's blues rock!

New member
Should I approach you in some subtle way, my love?
To shower on your person, all I have in me to give
Would then you tritely interact and lightly shove
Or would you reach embracing that our love may live

My eyes devour and synthesize you by degrees
My lips with hunger open, blithely move apart
Yet, it to me seems you grow cold; will surely freeze
In desolated place, you coldly lay my heart

It laying here so cold; within this prison deep
Would but a kiss upon these lips so blue and cold
Awake me from this ghastly state in which I keep
If only you would take my hand; to be so bold

Come lay beside me on my journey, keep me warm
Together we may pass intrepid through this storm
 
I couldn't help pausing after the tenth syllable in some lines. Is that okay?
I like your "experiment." This would be iambic hexameter, I think. I just looked it up.
Tricky . I like!
 
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