A poem would like comments thanks.?

Ann

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I only planned to pop in,
say happy birthday and
hope your day's gone fine
but you just had to ply me
with that home made student wine.

I'm quite reserved,
I 've always known my limits,
I drink lemonade,
there's never no gin in it.

I don't know why,
I really can't explain
but I'm grinding to your music
that once drove me quite insane.

I have to say though,
that cake you baked,
a treat,so I really can not fathom
why I'm wanting more to eat.

Your friends all seem lovely,
they giggle at all I say,
a funny smell in this room though,
it's kind of like burnt hay.

Well happy birthday daughter
I only just popped in,
so nice to see your getting on
and living without sin?????
 
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