a poem???some advice?

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i stand at the edge
the puddle of my tears mimic me
why am i here, like perched on a ledge
of all eternity
the ripples flow moving slowly away
theres no where i belong on this downcast day
my happiness is drained leavving only sadness in its wake



anything you can thing of to right next?
 
but of what wake do I speak? have the words begun forsake?
well it is only I who lays claim to this stake
but to follow my words with such a clear mistake
doesn't that reduce my effort and make it none but fake?
and to my poetry then no sane man would take
but to lie and die is only to sow the seeds I rake
so sow and sow away again until the day I wake
for if I only tell the truth I am felt in the nake.
and then my body falls on me and under it I'll break
 
the emptiness in the solitude life you take ,
devour my soul and end this torment
Kill the seed of endless pain
my heart you bleed in vain
 
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