A poem i wrote, please helpful critisism needed?

[Maniacishere]

hey, poem writing not really my thing, but i had i idea and came up with this. I accept the fact the most of the regulars in the poetry sections are lot more skilled, but i only want helpful critism
not "its crap"
tell me why its crap and how i can improve it,
here it is

Daydreaming

Streets are dark,
Night is close,
The streetlights flicker,
The raindrops fall,
The backdrops dim,
A figure in the streets,
This is you,

In a hurry,
you walk through the gloom,
The bushes now rustle,
A footstep, not yours,
You look back into the darkness,
As quick as lightning the villians surround you,
Will you escape,

You are in trouble,
But now here i am,
Block a few punches,
Return some the same,
They're dazed and confused,
And here is the chance,
I grab your hand and run into the rain,

Footsteps get closer,
approaching behind,
we find a turning and hide,
the foosteps then fade,
you look into my eyes,
I look into yours,
and then i wake up,


please comment, ill provide additional info if needed.
Thanks, aah commas are a bit of a habit for me, i
what dont you like about 3rd stanza?

 

[༒]

Get rid of the commas.
And you don't really need the third paragraph.

 

[belle7]

I like the feel of the poem. it is good. but yeah you don't need the third paragraph. other then that it was good.