A poem I wrote and I am wondering what you guys think about it. This poem was

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supposed to explain myself. ? What am I?

I am the ever so soft feathers in your pillow,
I am the pearly white tiger of Siberia,
continuously running through the soft snow,
Blending in ever so calmly.
I am the color red,
Bright and radiant,
I am the color green,
full of life and peacefulness.
I am a silent snow storm,
fierce and elegant.
I am the smell of a tundra,
sharp and fresh.
I am the taste of limes,
sour, but ever so tempting.
I am the sound of a tiger roaring,
bold and frightening.
I am the son of Earth,
full of life.
I am the dream of success,
The dream of becoming prosperous.
Who am I?

I wrote this for Language Arts, is the poem any good? Thanks for your answers.



It is not a poem about god. It's supposed to be about me, but I dont really think this describes me alot I just wrote what I could :/
 
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