A poem. Could I get thoughts or opinions? Thanks!?

igor

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Poets laughed
and tasted earth

Spoke one with vigor:
"Thus Sarpedon proves his heritage
spear sailing eternal
thru
the vertebrae of humanity."

Another in reply:
"He lives in his students
in which the case
becomes the word.

Writer is to be taken literally
thru gunsmoke."

They shuffled around reliefs
inscribed with mysterious tongues
reinterpreted
like dismembered armaments

Contemplation.
Spoke the leader in despair:
"I will be by the pit
utterly consumed."

A froth broiled in their brains

Names to drop: no names
They dissipated into the sun
 
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