1 minute poem, what do you think?

[Princess Tia]

Lost in the darkness and surrounded by time. There is nothing left to say . Time has taken my words. Once a friend, now an enemy, once indifferent , now so familiar. I bat my eyes to get time on my good side but know it's done in vain. Time stops for no one. The most precious gift of all. We all want what we don't have. Time seems to be just that.

I was bored and wrote this poem in 1 minute, 5 seconds. Tell me what you think about it plz.

 

[Sarah]

well, it's not really a poem as much as a reflection. you have some interesting thoughts in here. i recommend spending more time on your writing, you would probably be surprised with what you can come up with! good luck

 

[Manny]

I think it's really good, expecially if you just wrote it in 1 minute!

 

[Matty (matilda)]

I can't believe you wrote it in that much time!
I think it's very good ,it really makes you appreciate what you've got!

 

[Mike]

I really like it.
As a poem, it's really good.
As a poem that was written in a minute, it's incredible.