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Good, except for the last two lines. The imagery is good, though some of the lines may take a few reads to understand. It's certainly not bad. The last two lines, however, ruin the mood and sounds amateurish. It sounds better without the last two lines.

We are renting a 2010 Honda Civic while our van is in the shop. It was alright yesterday, not that good of a car, but alright. But this morning, when we turned it on, and went to take my brother to school, there was a strange, lit-up symbol on our dashboard. It looked something like this: (!)...