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    could you help me improve my fall haiku?

    Fans eagerly cheer, A touchdown finally scored! Can it really be? THANK YOU!
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    could someone please read my ode and let me know how to fix it?

    Red, Green, and White The colors of Christmas time Snow begins to fall down Blankets of soft, thickness Fresh pine trees begin to go on sale When I hear the tunes of Christmas Their jingles make me tingle Oh Christmas, how I enjoy when you are near When dainty decorations are put around...
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    help with editing ode, please & thankyou!?

    Pointe shoes After dedicating hours to finding the best pair I become obsessed I adore your pristine, pink perfection The way you begin; soft, shiny, satin Arriving at class Tying the ribbons right Into criss-crosses Pointe shoes Strolling onto the dance floor How I love the sound you make...
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