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    'Peculiar' is the title, will you c/c this poem?

    Blessings to all. this is the Dallas that I know sweet and kind, sometime a child but most of the time a women. Her sayings and writing is a great inspiration to me. She reminds me of the girl in my poem. The Far away girl. This verse is for you Dallas, i hope you read it. The faraway...
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    What would you do to strengthen this rhyming sestina?

    Blessings, very good and inspirational, sad and vivid image , the writer is crying out to his maker, deep feelings and emotions . There are a reason for every season under the sun. Man cannot comprehend the mighty things of God , we looked at the things we can see and understand and...
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    Exploring the laws of nature. Will you comment please?

    Hi. Nice vision, this poem speak a true about child hood and growing up. very well writing, very funny it put a graphic image in my head. Simple wonderful. It just reminded me of my self, back in those days thinking i was some kind of super hero unti i came tumbling down.true, emotive, and...
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    What would you do to strengthen this rhyming sestina?

    Blessings, very good and inspirational, sad and vivid image , the writer is crying out to his maker, deep feelings and emotions . There are a reason for every season under the sun. Man cannot comprehend the mighty things of God , we looked at the things we can see and understand and...
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    Is this limerick good?Easy points!?

    Hello blessings to you. i like Bobby Joe it 's a common name What about. Robert-Joe it's not that common How about if you change window for 1 plus 1 don't know. The Limerick is great and easy to read. Just my thoughts.
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    Is this limerick good?Easy points!?

    Hello blessings to you. i like Bobby Joe it 's a common name What about. Robert-Joe it's not that common How about if you change window for 1 plus 1 don't know. The Limerick is great and easy to read. Just my thoughts.
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    Is this limerick good?Easy points!?

    Hello blessings to you. i like Bobby Joe it 's a common name What about. Robert-Joe it's not that common How about if you change window for 1 plus 1 don't know. The Limerick is great and easy to read. Just my thoughts.
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    !! Any one have good Poems, about a husband-Birthday.?

    Today is my husband Birthday i just want to cheer him up a little with some thing different. Thanks.
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