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Everything I've read on here is either an emo poem or a cliché romance poem. And everyones response? “OMG that was so great!”, why must they encourage bad poetry? Give them some constructive criticism, don't sugar coat it. A poem I read on here recently: “Dark red cuts, he was so good to me...

I'm guessing it's about a boy that you like, but he likes another girl, am I wrong? It could definitely use some improvement. You're kinda all over the place, it sounds like you were trying to rhyme, but it just came out messy. Hard to follow. The poem's okay, don't stop writing. I'm sure with...