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    Birth control causing terrible mood swings?

    My girlfriend never used to be the crying type, I cried more than her, but lately she has been getting so sad at times that it's just uncontrollable tears that I don't know how to help. She has been through a lot in the past year, including the introduction of birth control 5 months ago which is...
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    Constructive criticism on poem:?

    You successfully used about every poetic device there is in one poem, impressive. You are very talented. However, I think you need to focus a little more on what you are saying than how you are saying it. The message is unclear. Also, if you can write in meter (yeah yeah its boring and what...
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