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    What would you do to improve this quick villanelle?

    You stare at me and see what is not here Look at the melting life surrounding you These rags, this loneliness will disappear As all the laughing stars, the joy and fear. And yes you see the quiet emptiness You stare at me and see what is not here This world is one of noise yet you can’t hear...
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    On books and learning, kindly C/c thank you.?

    On LC's question, what use is learning to a pauper: What use books, knowledge, ways to see the world, To learn to deal with it, its laws and men, What use to know protection and defense, And poetry, why flags are rolled and then unfurled? What use is it to read and write and see The various...
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    Project Performance Help. It's about Poetry and the theme is Women/ Woman.?

    Which ads work these days? Which are watched often? Arent they the sex ads, suggestive of passion, displaying feminine parts? So, do what most ad companies would, get one of the girls to do a sex commercial (but do not be blatant please), just a little bit flirty.
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    What do you think of my poem?

    That was wonderful!! You in grade 4? Yey!!
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    What do you think of my poem?

    That was wonderful!! You in grade 4? Yey!!
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