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    Will you please read and comment on a poem inspired by LC?

    Thank you for your time. I would also like to apologize to those who have answered my posts that went into voting. Indecisiveness leaves me procrastinating on BA, until *poof* they are gone. Sorry. Have you longed to give your heart just for the sake of giving? Withheld for years...
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    Will you please comment on this attempt at a sestina?

    Thank you very much for you time. If I should reach out, will you take my hand And hold me ‘til I see that promised land? Will you still hold me when my tears have dried And close these lids the moment I have died? I wonder, will you stay with me some more If I should falter, falling to...
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    A poem about hiking and... please read and comment?

    If you don't mind, a brief Alouette...(?) I am truly sorry if this has grown old. I do appreciate your comments. Thank you. Over mountaintop, Footsteps never stop Keeping faith along the way. In the autumn breeze, Higher than the trees, We seek paths that lead the way. Fresh air...
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    Does poetry make you feel alive?

    I want to feel my heart beat wildly Instead it sits and waits here idly It needs a little exercise A word from you, a sweet surprise It's funny just how I can get No one would know, nor ever bet That poetry can make me yearn For things brand new, I've yet to learn Just how you get inside my...
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