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    Do you enjoy this short part of my book?

    I spent the whole night sitting next to Omar on his bed. His nanny called the doctor, and some whispering took place between nanny and the doctor. They were cold, soft whispers. Whispers that shook me, and made me feel as if I might loose Omar, as if his baritone, warm voice would fade out of my...
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    Would you give me any advice to improve my writing?

    here's an example of my writing. It's extracted from chapter 10 of my book. Hope you like it. I walked home. Images of Omar’s nanny, crying silently over Omar’s dead body and Ali patting her gently over her shoulder, ran in front of me. At some point, I believed that god would never abandon...
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    How to spice up my writing?

    I mean how can i make my writing more graping and fun to read. Here's a piece of my natural, unedited writing style. I stood in the middle of the living room. My heart was throbbing harder with every passing moment. I wished that everything would end soon. My mother was sitting beside me on the...
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    Would you read this book?

    it's unedited so tell me what do u think. Chapter 1 I stood in the middle of the living room. My heart was throbbing harder with every passing moment. I wished that everything would end soon. My mother was sitting beside me on the sofa, her head leaning to her left shoulder. The TV was...
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