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    Care to comment on my poem about hateful comments?

    I just got tired of reading these uneducated nonsensical reviews on my poetry ebooks (self published btw) so I wrote a little rhyme for these "critics" what do you guys think? Is it enough for 'em? Your Award And the award for best critic goes to… The review with the most exclamations! It’s...
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    What are your thoughts on this scene of my novel? (Kinda short)?

    Darrel is David's boyfriend. David and Darrel are 16, and they killed two little boys. David is in the hospital after being attacked. Darrel's mom, Elizabeth, is there after slipping and hurting her head. The news has reported that biopsies of the two boys David and Darrel killed are undergoing...
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    What do you think of this poem of my long lost love?

    Soo, I just wrote this poem, I was thinking the whole time about a boy I loved when I was 13 (a year ago) and things ended badly right before he moved to New York. :/ Thoughts??? Upper-West Fair Are you going to the Upper-West fair? Broken hearts never heal with time Remember me to the boy who...
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