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    Another one of my Poems? Comments Suggested?

    Silver v/s Gold Roads are filled with mimes, Guiding throughout the mind, Not a single word spoken, Everything was understood, Silence was never broken, Everyone was leaving to work. Joy, happiness, love, fear, All were expressed by a single tear, No songs were written, So peaceful it was, Not...
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    Any Opinions on My Poem Please?

    Have you ever known the feeling of losing your other half? The world, nothing more without the person,nothing less Finding that one thing that made you joyful, In the moments you needed it best? His aches were stolen and thrown in a second, away, Ropes of hope were ripping slowly off my cardiac...
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    What Do you Think of This Poem I Wrote?

    Lucid Controversy Contemplating the joys of symphonies I throw my melodies At the passing soldier Where have you gone? I was being fed and tortured Feeling thus i didn't belong The way the notes were sliding I couldn't let them take the hand I tried to hold back the harmony But the music...
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    What Do you Think of This Poem I Wrote?

    Lucid Controversy Contemplating the joys of symphonies I throw my melodies At the passing soldier Where have you gone? I was being fed and tortured Feeling thus i didn't belong The way the notes were sliding I couldn't let them take the hand I tried to hold back the harmony But the music...
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    Lucid Controversy, Opinions please?

    Contemplating the joys of symphonies I throw my melodies At the passing soldier Where have you gone? I was being fed and tortured Feeling thus i didn't belong The way the notes were sliding I couldn't let them take the hand I tried to hold back the harmony But the music slowly took end...
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    Lucid Controversy, Opinions Please?

    Contemplating the joys of symphonies I throw my melodies At the passing soldier Where have you gone? I was being fed and tortured Feeling thus i didn't belong The way the notes were sliding I couldn't let them take the hand I tried to hold back the harmony But the music slowly took end...
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