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    Do you like this free verse poem i wrote?

    Title: Become me Thumb tracks down the song That fits inside the build up of emotions Sinking in the soup of my stomach Waiting to be ripped from the trenches Ear buds placed inside the ears Like babies in the arms of mothers Press the start button to feel The vibration running fingers along...
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    Rate my poem please? [kind of long but compared to others no so much...]?

    [it's two pages on word so it's long for me but compared to like Song of Myself by walt whitman or The Odyssey by homer- it's short!] Title: Sister screaming "get away from me!" (c) All of these rooms And all of these walls Can you hear the sirens through the radio’s speakers? Can you hear...
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    I have another poem to be rated?

    [a little long but still good :)] Title: Closer (c) One step forward, Two steps back, That’s how the girl, Keeps herself on track Staring at the ground, Noticing one of shoes has a hole Stepping in the imaginary rhythm, Trying to get some control Her feet even move back and forth When she...
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    Can you rate my poem out of 10?

    TELL US (c) Sometimes I’m two people at once I feel tangled up in many things Confronting the distant laughter Life is suspended by strings “Tells us what happened to Amy,” Something about this voice is a joke Something about this chair screams Trying to fix whatever Amy broke “She dropped...
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