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    Will you comment on my rambling please?

    Feeling then, the long blade of winter as it slid through closed windows insisting on ripping, stealing my sleeping warmth cocooned stabbing at my upturned form awakened by an agitated flock of crows teasing the power line, hovering not quite hidden in naked trees I rose, cursing the day, yet...
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    Almost late rambling, will you comment please?

    This is not at all a Haiku or even a decent Senryu it's just a night sharing with you. The oyster lays bedded. It only takes an irritating grain of sand to give birth to a pearl
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    Rambling in free verse, will you comment please?

    It's rife with land mines hidden by intent and there are no pages sequential with lines, to color in the empty as we ignore dictates to stay inside. There are no maps to refer to as we seek direction or water colors premixed with a brush or needle we must create our own murals, or sew our own...
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    Rambling in free verse, will you comment please?

    It's rife with land mines hidden by intent and there are no pages sequential with lines, to color in the empty as we ignore dictates to stay inside. There are no maps to refer to as we seek direction or water colors premixed with a brush or needle we must create our own murals, or sew our own...
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    Wandering minds wanna know, will you comment please?

    In crossing a desert invented, in the heat of a surmised mirage a lizard presented dead and drying in the sun, changed nothing, but a thought "This would make a nice belt, two however could have been shoes." Must have been all the Peyote?
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    Just rambling, will you comment please?

    Hunters take trophies the hungry, gathering sustenance are more fulfilled
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    A Haiku, I hope, will you comment please?

    Hushed are the waves washing, almost forgotten upon morning tide Even with the suggestion of breaking I still count 5 - 7 - 5,,, 17, though "are" or "the" are often not considered as syllables which baffles me, and breaking adds no more or no less than washing. OK I confess maybe I messed up...
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    Haiku-ish, will you comment please?

    Midnight, in the eastern sky my wishin star hides in clouds hung low, tomorrow I'll try again Wishin Y'all a good night
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    Might this be two poems, or part of a tome? Will you comment please?

    A story in ever line written a line in every story, fittin calculate the sum of the essence recheck figures, missed directions suggested. This is not a game you see it is some culmination of we who balance right brain and left sometimes bereft, drained, sleep If life is a poker game with no...
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    Off "beat" haiku, will you comment please?

    Hey lets git go Jack Lets be ridin this Kerouac and never come back I do study and learn, smiles. Lots I'm naive about though
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    Pleasantries exchanged, will you C/C please?

    Is this what goes on at the work water cooler? Who is the fool and who is the fool-er? In passing, flashing broad smiles intentionally the style, Panama city tan, was the plan. Nice dress I said. "Thanks my hair is a mess." words spoken lies broken. Copy machine technologies dream. Are you gonna...
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    Not so poetry, will you C/C please?

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBagqdscIdQ This year past will last long in memories sung as joyful and sad songs. I've met and kept so many here in issues resounding, whom I've not helped but hold so dear. So if it's OK to say for those who may not celebrate On this Christmas day. Will you...
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    I wonder as I wander, will you C/C please?

    I've walked on the surface of the Sun cold the sense in high degrees Touched the Moon dead but blistered, my knees crawling. Cosmic storm Tossed, turning always burning nailed to fates cross forsaken, lost Where is the Prince to kiss out the poison find and return my glass slipper Win me...
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    Early rambling, will you C/C please?

    Flying from the peak of the barn roof illogical, yet telling proof that newspaper wings and strings didn't work, Twice tried. Icarus may not have been such a fool in his dreams, crafted the tools to rise to the Sun, finding it heated fell. To deny the attempt is to submit to the sense of "I...
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    Pleasantries exchanged, will you C/C please?

    Is this what goes on at the work water cooler? Who is the fool and who is the fool-er? In passing, flashing broad smiles intentionally the style, Panama city tan, was the plan. Nice dress I said. "Thanks my hair is a mess." words spoken lies broken. Copy machine technologies dream. Are you gonna...
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    Always weary, wandering, wondering, will you C/C please?

    Plastic colors glow in the sun, streaming from tight handle grips Speeding tricycle, screaming, dreaming Fast as you can child you will go growing blindly into your wild. Chrome coated bell jingles, "Get out of my way" no course known, just feeling a tingle There are no brakes, who cares life...
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    Early rambling, will you C/C please?

    Flying from the peak of the barn roof illogical, yet telling proof that newspaper wings and strings didn't work, Twice tried. Icarus may not have been such a fool in his dreams, crafted the tools to rise to the Sun, finding it heated fell. To deny the attempt is to submit to the sense of "I...
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    Sleepy rambling, will you C/C please?

    Splendiferous Glamtamerous Unilaterous familimus unpretentiflus credibilous naughtynicetruss conjectoreous canflantankeritus oblivioulus secretinatious confusimuss elusiverous loveilibus That's what Y'all are to me. Hugs. Dictionarily I might disagree, but I wrote my own ya see. Love on yer hours.
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    Pleasantries exchanged, will you C/C please?

    Is this what goes on at the work water cooler? Who is the fool and who is the fool-er? In passing, flashing broad smiles intentionally the style, Panama city tan, was the plan. Nice dress I said. "Thanks my hair is a mess." words spoken lies broken. Copy machine technologies dream. Are you gonna...
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    Pleasantries exchanged, will you C/C please?

    Is this what goes on at the work water cooler? Who is the fool and who is the fool-er? In passing, flashing broad smiles intentionally the style, Panama city tan, was the plan. Nice dress I said. "Thanks my hair is a mess." words spoken lies broken. Copy machine technologies dream. Are you gonna...
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