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    Girls..I wrote a poem for a girl..opinions?

    I wrote a poem/song for my ex gf who i still like. I want some feedback. This is a shorter version and work still in progress. Thanks. The first time I saw you I said to myself you're beautiful I asked myself if you were an angel cause you're really really beautiful And this one day I came to...
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    A short love poem I wrote...feed back please?

    It's Christmas time and I only want a couple of things One is a Christmas dance When I can ask you out and say Give me another chance Girl I can be the guy you want me to be And at the end of the night I want you to be thinking 'bout me The past is gone The future is long And in this song I...
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    I wrote a poem for a girl..opinions?

    I wrote a poem/song for my ex gf who i still like. I want some feedback. This is a shorter version and work still in progress. Thanks. The first time I saw you I said to myself you're beautiful I asked myself if you were an angel cause you're really really beautiful And this one day I came to...
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    Poem for a girl...can i get feedback?

    I wrote a poem/song for my ex gf who i still like. I want some feedback. This is a shorter version and work still in progress. Thanks. The first time I saw you I said to myself you're beautiful I asked myself if you were an angel cause you're really really beautiful And this one day I came to...
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    A love poem...want feedback?

    I wrote a love poem/song: The first time I saw you I said to myself you're beautiful I asked myself if you were an angel cause you're really really beautiful And this one day I came to your house and I said something that you never heard its that I love you love you love you like no one else...
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