i used to play hockey, but it was too time consuming
im14, female, and i live in canada, so right now there's snow outside and it's too cold to do anything out there
that waz really good
just the part where it says 'the song would end soon' just doesn't seem to 'flow' try re-phrasing it
and disguise, that part i just didn't really like, but other than that great job!!!