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    What do you think of this part of my book, it is the start of chapter2?

    Hi, would just like some opinions please? Thank you x I opened my eyes slowly. Shaking my head to clear the fuzziness, I attempted to look around. My vision was blurred; it was difficult to make out anything other than flickering orange lights, in the distance. My head was aching and I could...
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    The opening paragraph of my book, does it?

    Hi this is my opening para of my book, does it grab you and make you want to read more? If not, what is wrong with it and what would make it better? thanks x I heard the high pitched ring of the phone coming from down the hallway. It came, just as I had placed my hand on the door knob. I...
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    honda CRX burning oil is this normal?

    just got this car and not sure if the exhaust fumes are normal? also going through a litre 1/2 oil every two weeks is this normal?
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    what do you think of my book(part two)?

    hi so what do you think of my book. I opened my eyes slowly. Shaking my head to clear the fuzziness, I attempted to look around. My vision was blurred, It was difficult to make out anything other than flickering orange lights, in the distance. My head was aching and I could feel the warm blood...
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