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    An excerpt from my book? It will be confusing, but please justge on writing style!?

    (HEY I WOULD JUST LIKE SOME INPUT ON THIS EXCERPT FROM MY STORY. I KNOW IT'S CONFUSING BECAUSE IT'S SOME RANDOM PART, BUT I WANT TO MAKE IT BETTER! THANKS!) From Little Rock, Arkansas to Denver, Colorado it was a nine hundred and forty mile trip. Considering the lengthy distance, it would take...
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    Another "excerpt" from my book...?

    “Jayson!” Chris called, jumping to his feet and crossing the empty stage to pat his nephew on the back. “It’s been too long, my boy!” “How are you, Uncle Chris?” Jay asked. “I’m terrific,” Chris said. “What are you doing here? Just wanted to see your uncle, I bet.” “Heard you were on tour,” Jay...
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    Some more of my book....?

    “So what’s the deal, Kace?” Wade asked as he flipped through the channels on the TV. “Are you going to tell me why you hate Jay so much?” “What?” I said. “I don’t hate Jay.” “Could’ve fooled me. And probably him, too.” Wade said. I watched the channels on the TV skim past our eyes like a freight...
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    Good song for a hip-hop/jazz dance?

    I'll be teaching dance in a couple months when I start college, and I'm looking for a good song to teach to. Last year, a teacher of mine taught us a jazz dance to Creed's "Who's Got My Back". We got first place for it being so unique, and I want a rock-ish song like that. Any ideas? I'll be...
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    Good lyrical dance songs?

    Same question, only for a lyrical dance....last year my teacher had us do "Beautiful" by India Arie. Beautiful song for a beautiful dance :):)
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    Insert from my book....would you read all of it/buy it?

    “Oh, god,” I jumped up from the bed and darted to the bathroom, barely making it to the toilet in time, hyperventilating and dizzy. I leaned over and vomited, heaving and gagging in a not-so-attractive manner. Jay was immediately by my side, gathering up my loose hair and holding it up out of...
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